April 23, 2007
English 145 Paper 2
The Numbers DonÕt Lie-Global Warming is Here
ÒI would like to say we're at a point where global warming is impossible to deny. Let's just say that global warming deniers are now on a par with Holocaust deniers, though one denies the past and the other denies the present and future.Ó –Ellen Goodman, The Boston Globe.
As Ellen Goodman so eloquently states, global warming is not just a hypothesis anymore; it is an inconvenient truth. In recent years, more and more data has been collected and shared with the public about the dangerous effects global warming will have on future generations. One of the more convincing arguments for global warming is Al GoreÕs documentary An Inconvenient Truth. In this film he states that if we donÕt begin to make some changes in our day to day lives, our earth will not be the majestic place we see it today and our children are the ones that will be asking us why. To validate his argument that global warming is changing the world, Gore focuses on some key issues such as rising CO2 levels that are increasing the worldÕs temperature, the melting of Greenland, Antarctica, and the Arctic, and the numerous species of animals that are in danger of extinction. However, due to GoreÕs previous political involvement, many skeptics and critics have voiced their opinion that An Inconvenient Truth is nothing more then[CS1] GoreÕs attempt to test the waters for future elections to come. They also criticize GoreÕs data and continually console the public by saying that global warming is not as big of an issue as Gore makes it seem. However, I believe that GoreÕs documentary is very[CS2] informative and accurate and that we must listen to his message to save our planet.
One of the beginning points that Gore makes in his documentary is that CO2 levels are rising drastically and the earthÕs temperature will begin to rise as well because CO2 emissions and the temperature seem to fluctuate together. Gore even[CS3] shows a graph of this and to help illustrate his point further, Gore enhanced his graph [CS4]so that the CO2 levels would reach so high that they would be off the screen in his presentation. To back up his claim that CO2 levels and temperature are connected he also states that delete the Òten hottest years on record have occurred in the last 14 years and that the hottest of all was 2005Ó (chapter 11). Critics like Tom Harris of the Canadian Free Press argue that, "It is not unusual for some locations, out of the thousands of cities and towns in the U.S., to set all-time records. The actual data shows that overall, recent temperatures in the U.S. were not unusual." However, according to the multinational Arctic Climate Impact Assessment (ACIA) report Alaska, western Canada, and eastern Russia, has had average temperatures increase as much as 4 to 7 degrees Fahrenheit (3 to 4 degrees Celsius) in the past 50 years. The rise is nearly twice the global average. In fact, Barrow, Alaska (the U.S.'s northernmost city) average temperatures are up over 4 degrees Fahrenheit (2.5 to 3 degrees Celsius) in 30 years (Handwerk, 2004). I believe that these numbers do not lie. Global warming is happening and even though not every city is experiencing steady increases in temperature at this moment [CS5]doesnÕt mean that they never will.
Later
on in the documentary, Gore begins to show the effects of global warming by
showing numerous glaciers melting, especially those by[CS6]
Greenland, Antarctica, and the Arctic. Critics of this[CS7],
such as Dr. Dick Morgan say that "There has been some decrease in ice
thickness in the Canadian Arctic over the past 30 years but no melt down. The
Canadian Ice Service records show that from 1971-1981 there was average, to
above average, ice thickness. From 1981-1982 there was a sharp decrease of 15%
but there was a quick recovery to average, to slightly above average, values
from 1983-1995. A sharp drop of 30% occurred again 1996-1998 and since then
there has been a steady increase to reach near normal conditions since 2001Ó
(Harris, 2006). Nevertheless,
according to Brian Handwerk of National Geographic.com Òthe numbers show that
the rising temperatures have a dramatic impact on Arctic ice. Since 1978 Arctic
sea ice area has shrunk by some 9 percent per decade, and thinned as well. ACIA projects that at least half of the
Arctic's summer sea ice will melt by century's end, and that the Arctic region
is likely to warm 7 to 13 degrees Fahrenheit (4 to 7 degrees Celsius) during
the same time.Ó Professor Peter Wadhams supports this data as well by saying
that ÒRising air temperatures, possibly the consequence of global warming, are
melting the ice from above. And warmer water is also rising from the depths to
attack the ice from below.
(Consequently the Arctic) had thinned by 43% during the Arctic summerÓ
(Kirby, 2002). The data presented in GoreÕs documentary is consistent with the
findings of many scientists that have been studying the glacier melting phenomenon
and should be taken seriously.[CS8]
Gore also touches on the subject of the numerous animal species that are at risk of extinction because of global warming. [CS9]In the film, Gore shows that because of the melting glaciers, polar bears are drowning because they have to swim farther and farther distances to find a glacier to live on. According to Steven Amstrup, a polar-bear specialist with the U.S. Geological Survey in Anchorage, Alaska, "As the sea ice goes, that will direct to a very great extent what happens to polar bearsÓ (Carlton, 2005). Furthermore, researchers from the USGS, the University of Wyoming and the Canadian Wildlife Service found that the population of polar bears in Canada's western Hudson Bay -- near the southernmost habitat for the bears in the world -- fell to 935 in 2004 from 1,194 in 1987, a 22% drop. Researchers said Òthe decline -- the first recorded for these bears -- came in tandem with an extension by nearly a full month in the time it takes for Hudson Bay to ice over after the summerÓ (Carlton, 2005). Again I must say that the numbers do not lie. [CS10]As Gore says in his film and the polar bear specialists are finding, the decrease in the polar bear population can be linked with global warming.
However, polar bears are not the only species in danger of extinction because of global warming. [CS11]According to Tanya Plibersek of the Sydney Morning Herald, ÒAustralia has more endangered animal and plant species than any other continent - numbering hundreds - with 54 animal species and 61 plant species already extinct. Climate change will speed their demise. The number of bird and animal species listed as extinct, endangered or vulnerable rose by 41 per cent in the 10 years to last year.Ó This is consistent with the figure that Gore stated in his documentary that the ten hottest years on record have occurred in the last 14 years. This[CS12] shows that humans are not the only thing [CS13]that will be affected by global warming. The animals we live with will suffer far worse because of their dependence on nature. When an animalsÕ habitat changes as drastically as it has been in the past ten years these animals will not have enough time to adapt[CS14] thus causing their extinction- the exact thing that Gore warns us about.
Overall, I believe that An Inconvenient Truth is an accurate account of the current information about the issue of global warming. I believe that since global warming is still relatively new and highly controversial, many people donÕt want to wholeheartedly [CS15]accept everything Al Gore is saying. It is easy to find information that opposes the facts presented in the documentary; however, the main issue is the creditability factor of the writers of such facts. I believe that Gore uses credible sources and that he has researched all of the points he presents in his power point thoroughly. As soon as [CS16]people realize and change their attitudes about global warming, the better chance our earth has of surviving [CS17]for generations to come. [CS18]
Works Cited
Carlton, Jim. ÒIs Global Warming Killing the Polar Bears?.Ó The Wall Street Journal.
Online. 14 December 2005. 20 April 2007. <http://online.wsj.com/public/article_print/SB113452435089621905-vnekw47PQGtDyf3iv5XEN71_o5I_20061214.html>.
Goodman, Ellen. ÒNo change is political climate.Ó The Boston Globe. 9 February 2007.
20 April 2007. <http://www.boston.com/news/globe/editorial_opinion/oped/articles/2007/02/09/no_change_in_political_climate/.>.
Handwerk, Brian. ÒGlobal Warming Fast Facts.Ó National Geographic.com 6 December
2004. 20 April 2007. <http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2004/12/1206_041206_global_warming.html>.
Harris, Tom. ÒScientists respond to GoreÕs warnings of climate catastrophe.Ó Canada
Free Press. 12 June 2006. 20 April 2007.
<http://www.canadafreepress.com/2006/harris061206.htm.>.
Kirby, Alex. ÒArctic ice Ômelting from below.ÕÓ BBC News. 27 March 2002. 20 April
2007.< http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/1894740.stm>.
Plibersek, Tanya. ÒInconvenient Truth That CanÕt be IgnoredÓ. Sydney Morning Herald.
5 September 2006.
20 April 2007. <http://www.commondreams.org/views06/0905-33.htm>.
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[CS18] with the exception of stylistic errors, this is exemplary work. You've discovered and matched appropriate counters and rebuttals, selected crucial subtopics and presented the whole clearly and succinctly. Keep it up! A-