Strong & Weak Samples
of Student Writing
Essay Quizzes |
Path 2 Short Essays |
Term Paper Outlines |
Term Papers |
Poetry Analysis |
GWR ESSAYS |
strong essay quizzes (Engl 334) |
outline Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness |
fall '06 strong opening #1 |
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outline Virginia Woolf's To the Lighthouse |
strong film analysis of Pumpkin |
fall '06 strong opening #2 |
middling samples |
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strong film analysis of Moulin Rouge! |
fall '06 strong opening #3 |
weak samples |
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outline The House of Mirth |
weaker sample: organization problems |
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outline Virginia Woolf's novels |
weaker sample: difficulties narrowing focus |
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weaker sample: ineffective diction |
Dr. Paul Marchbanks
pmarchba@calpoly.edu