Dr. Debora B. Schwartz's Essay Evaluation Sheet

Dr. Debora B. Schwartz
English Department, California Polytechnic State University

ESSAY EVALUATION SHEET

YES	NO	CRITERIA	CATEGORY:

		Paper has a title which suggests topic/thesis of paper	THOUGHT
		Paper takes a position on a debatable point (not just observation/description)
		Thesis makes sense (is defensible)
		Paper presents a logical argument in support of its thesis
		Important ideas/concepts are addressed
		Textual evidence is well chosen
		Textual evidence is followed by analysis (interpretation of quoted passages)


		Introduction provides context and direction	ORGANIZATION
		Clear thesis statement is found at or near end of 1st paragraph	AND
		Paragraphs are unified and coherent	DEVELOPMENT
		Purpose of each paragraph is clear (represents a logical step in argument)
		Transitions between paragraphs are logical
		All necessary steps in argument are included (no leaps in logic)
		There is adequate textual support for each step in argument
		Points are made in logical order (e.g. most general/simple/obvious to most specific/complex/subtle)
		Summaries are provided only to make a point
		Paper is of appropriate length for assignment
		Concluding paragraphs are emphatic, relevant, logical


		Margins and line spacing are correct	MECHANICS
		Citations are woven smoothly into your prose (e.g. no fragments, clear pronoun references)	AND
		Sources are documented consistently and accurately in both foot/endnote and text	STYLE
		Evidence is properly quoted (slashes between verse lines, indented block quotations, final punctuation)
		1st & 2nd person references are avoided (whole paper is your thought; present it in a neutral way)

SYMBOL KEY: OTHER STYLISTIC AND MECHANICAL ERRORS

Refer to this list for explanation of correction codes in the text of your paper. [When used with brackets, code indicates that the problem occurs throughout the bracketed section.]

[ ? ]	=	Unclear. Sentence or paragraph in brackets does not make sense as constructed. Rework for greater clarity.
P	=	Paragraph. New thought--open a new paragraph; OR, paragraph is too long; try breaking it here.
ADJ	=	Adjective. ADJ?=is this adjective necessary? (Unnecessary adjectives are "window dressing." Use them only if they are the focus of your point.)
ADV	=	Adverb. ADV?=is this adverb necessary? ((Unnecessary adverbs are "window dressing." Use them only if they are the focus of your point.)
ANT?	=	Antecedent. Pronoun lacks clear grammatical antecedent (ambiguous pronoun); OR, pronoun does not agree with grammatical antecedent, e.g. Everyone (a SINGULAR antecedent) got their (a PLURAL pronoun) paper back.
AWK	=	Awkward. Reformulate.
BG	=	Basic Grammar. Error in e.g. possessives; adj. vs. adv; definite vs. indefinite vs. no article; subject vs. object pronouns; verbal forms; etc.
CAP	=	Capitalization is used inappropriately; OR, necessary capitalization is omitted.
DW	=	Dead Wood. Unnecessarily wordy or redundant. Rework for greater concision; eliminate unnecessary words.
[ FP ]	=	Faulty Parallelism. Sentence(s) in brackets misconstructed due to lack of parallelism between elements. Rework.
[FRAG]	=	Sentence Fragment. Sentence in brackets is grammatically incomplete or lacks main subject/verb clause. Rework.
ITAL	=	Italics (or Underlining) are needed; or, italics/underlining used inappropriately. Remember to italicize or underline: titles of full-length works (but not of your paper); words in languages other than modern English.
PREP	=	Preposition. Preposition is not used correctly; OR, wrong preposition chosen; OR, preposition needed.
PUNC	=	Punctuation. Correct punctuation. With few exceptions (see MLA Handbook), ONLY grammatically complete sentences (subject and verb) are separated by periods, semi-colons or colons (and NOT by commas).
PV	=	Passive Voice. Rework sentence to use active rather than passive verbal forms. ("He says," not "it is said that")
REF?	=	Unclear Reference. Vague--what do you mean? NB: in formal expository writing (unlike everyday speech), don't use "this"/"that"/"these"/"those" as pronouns (alone, without a following noun). Instead, tell me, "this what"?
S/I	=	Split Infinitive. Do not put adverb (or "not") between "to" and verb (wrong: "to swiftly go"; right: "to go swiftly")
SP	=	Spelling. Word misspelled.
S/V	=	Subject/Verb Agreement. Verb doesn't agree with subject in person or number (e.g. he are; they is); rework.
T	=	Tone. Tone is inappropriate (i.e chatty or colloquial, e.g. in vocabulary or use of 1st/2nd person references)
VT	=	Verb Tense. Incorrect use of verb tense. (Remember that as a rule, the PRESENT TENSE is used in literary analysis. Past tense is appropriate only for limited use, e.g. to make a point about historical context, or to explain an event that took place prior to the events recounted in the work.)
WC	=	Word Choice. Word/idiom is used incorrectly; OR, word is oddly chosen--are you sure you said what you meant?; OR, diction (word choice) is inappropriate for topic and assignment (slang, vulgar, colloquialisms, etc.)

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