There are many essential elements to any well-written poem: sound, voice, structure, cadence, etc. But imagery is probably the first thing a new poet should attend to, because a strong concrete image is almost always the foundation of a good poem. Accordingly, students should also be concerned with specific details and accuracy. Contemporary poetry is replete with superb imagistic poems. Here are a few with particularly arresting images.
| Shooting Rats at the Bibb County Dump |
David Bottoms |
| Pastoral |
Norman Dubie |
| A Green Crab's Shell |
Mark Doty |
| A Summer Song Cycle |
Kathy Fagan |
| Fresh Stain |
Tess Gallagher |
| The August Possessions |
T.R. Hummer |
| His Body |
Sandra McPherson |
| The Traveling Onion |
Naomi Shihab Nye |
| Hitch Haiku |
Gary Snyder |
| Vegetables I and II |
Ruth Stone |
POEMS WITH RELATIVES
Some of our most primal writing involves the subject of relatives. Sometimes writing about a relative is a way to write about the self. On balance, it's usually best to avoid excessive demonizing or mythologizing of the relative-but, as Plath showed us, not always. A tip: Students writing about childhood experiences may want to avoid using childlike appellations such as ¡±mommy,¡° ¡°daddy,¡± ¡°mom,¡± and ¡°dad.¡± ¡°Mother¡± and ¡°father¡± are much safer. When writing such a poem, always try to remember that the poem may be about childhood but it is written for a mature, adult reading audience.
| Identifying Things |
Wendy Barker |
| The Dance of the Sheets |
Angie Estes |
| My Grandmother in Paris |
Sandra Gilbert |
| Grandfather |
Michael Harper |
| Death, the last visit |
Marie Howe |
| Compound Light |
T.R. Hummer |
| Little Sleep's-Head Sprouting Hair in the Moonlight |
Galway Kinnell |
| Starlight |
Philip Levine |
| Salvage Operations |
Paul Mariani |
| Rainbow |
Susan Mitchell |
| Poems for My Mothers and Other Makers of Asafetida |
Thylias Moss |
| The Moment |
Sharon Olds |
| Summer Celestial |
Stanley Plumly |
| Hush |
David St. John |
| Venus in the Tropics |
Louis Simpson |
| The Bath |
Gary Snyder |
| Where Are the Waters of Childhood? |
Mark Strand |
| How Aunt Maud Took to Being a Woman |
Ruth Stone |
| The Bed |
Gary Young |
| Full Circle |
Jonathan Holden |
NARRATIVE POEMS
Very simply, narrative poems tell a story. Many narrative poems may actually weave a number of stories together at the same time. Intriguing tales, a compelling voice, and good associative transitions mark most narrative poems.
| The Back Room |
Karen Fish |
| In the Underground Garage |
Ed Hirsch |
| The Accident |
Lisa Lewis |
| Bystanders |
William Matthews |
| A Story |
Susan Mitchell |
| Palindrome |
Lisel Meuller |
| Infidelity |
Stanley Plumly |
| The Runner |
Louis Simpson |
| The Little Boys |
Elizabeth Spires |
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SEQUENTIAL POEMS
As critics M.L. Rosenthal and Sally M. Gall have pointed out in their book The Modern Poetic Sequence, the sequence may be the most fruitful poetic form of the twentieth century. A sequence is typically characterized by separate but related sections of one poem. These sections are often enumerated or otherwise marked. The sequential form is a kind of verse collage, allowing poets to take spatial and temporal leaps without using more conventional transitions. In general, a sequential poem requires one or more narrative themes to carry the reader through to completion.
| He Kept On Burning |
Ai |
| Sweet Home, Saturday Night |
David Baker |
| Beneath the Shadow of the Freeway |
Lorna Dee Cervantes |
| Atlantis |
Mark Doty |
| Thomas and Beulah |
Rita Dove |
| Elegies for the Ochre Deer on the Walls at Lascaux |
Norman Dubie |
| The Love Sequence |
Sandra Gilbert |
| Fortress |
Brenda Hillman |
| The Book of Nightmares |
Galway Kinnell |
| Debridement |
Michael Harper |
| Marathon |
Louise Gluck |
| Kicking the Leaves |
Donald Hall |
| In San Antonio |
Andrew Hudgins |
| Smash and Scatteration |
James McManus |
| Four Good Things |
James McMichael |
| History of My Heart |
Robert Pinsky |
| Twenty-One Love Poems |
Adrienne Rich |
| The City of Women |
Sherod Santos |
| The Muse of Distance |
Alan Williamson |
MID-LENGTH AND LONG POEMS
For the sake of definition, let's say that a mid-length poem may be two or three pages long. A ¡°long¡± poem is, therefor, three pages or longer. As with sequential poems, longer poems often require students to employ one or more narrative themes to compel the reader through to closure.
| Syringa |
John Ashbery |
| Snow White at the Convention Finds the Bear |
Wendy Barker |
| The Promise |
Toi Derricotte |
| Live Oaks |
Nancy Eimers |
| Regalia for a Black Hat Dancer |
Robert Hass |
| The Venetian Vespers |
Anthony Hecht |
| Grafik |
Juan Felipe Herrera |
| A Daily Glory |
Mark Jarman |
| Talking Richard Wilson Blues . . . |
Denis Johnson |
| Fresh Air |
Kenneth Koch |
| Quarter to Six |
Dorianne Laux |
| The Cleaving |
Li-Young Lee |
| Elegy with a Thumbful of Water in the Cage |
Larry Levis |
| Quiet Money |
Robert McDowell |
| Self-Portrait with Two Faces |
Susan Mitchell |
| The Hand of God with a Few Bright Flowers |
William Olsen |
| The Tower of Pisa |
Cathy Song |
| Blue Ridge |
Ellen Bryant Voight |
| The Southern Cross |
Charles Wright |
POEMS ABOUT THE PSYCHE UNDER PRESSURE
Modern and contemporary poetry is filled with poems about anger, anxiety, and paranoia. Here are a few examples.
| Cruelty |
Ai |
| St. Augustine |
T.R. Hummer |
| The Monk's Insomnia |
Denis Johnson |
| Curriculum Vitae |
Lawrence Joseph |
| Bridget |
Lisa Lewis |
| Trying to Talk with a Man |
Adrienne Rich |
| St. Thomas Aquinas |
Charles Simic |
ECKPHRASTIC POEMS
Based on Breughel's Icarus, ¡°Musee des Beaux Arts¡± by British poet W.H. Auden is perhaps the best known twentieth century eckphrastic poem. An echphrastic poem is inspired by a work of visual art. Writing the eckphrastic poem often requires that students practice what Keats called ¡°negative capability,¡± the process of imagining one's self in a situation one has not necessarily experienced
| Self-Portrait in a Convex Mirror |
John Ashbery |
| To Bessie Drennan |
Mark Doty |
| Preparation for the Wedding |
Lorrie Goldensohn |
GENDER POEMS
Like writing relative poems, writing gender poems can be an especially powerful experience. The gender poem usually describes the forces that shape feminine and masculine behavior.
| On Climbing Trees, For Louisa May Alcott |
Wendy Barker |
| Aim |
Bruce Bond |
| What He Hates/What He Loves |
Sandra Gilbert |
| In Your Bad Dream |
Richard Hugo |
| My Manhood |
Rodney Jones |
| The Ditch/td> |
Michael Ryan |
| The Pornography Box |
Dave Smith |
ELEGY
The elegy is one of the oldest and most popular forms. Elegies mourn the loss of a person or, sometimes, a state of being. When writing elegies, students should try to avoid excessive bathos, that is, overdone or insincere expressions of sentiment.
| Almost Blue |
Mark Doty |
| Two of Anything |
Tess Gallagher |
November 26, 1992: Thanksgiving at Sea Ranch:
Contemplating Metempsychosis |
Sandra Gilbert |
| Last Fugue for Chet |
Linda Hull |
| Elegy in Advance |
Vern Rutsala |
| Elegy |
William Stafford |
| Le Petit Salvie |
CK Williams |
PROSE POEMS
Prose poems do not make use of the poetic line-and accordingly often make poets appreciate the line that much more. While the line may provide a helpful tension in a conventional poem, the prose poem must find a substitute way of maneuvering the reader into and through the body of the poem. Though not at all points as taut as the typical lineated poem, prose poems can surprise readers if poets find devices that accentuate theme and voice.
| In the Hinglai Desert |
Chitra Divakaruni |
| Crystal Lake |
Joy Harjo |
| A Story of the Body |
Robert Hass |
| An Anointing |
Thylias Moss |
POLITICAL POEMS
Political poems are usually concerned with some kind of social injustice. But such poems are difficult to write because they are vulnerable to excessive didacticism. If you just have to get something off your chest, write an editorial or a letter to the editor. As Jonathan Holden has told us, the best political poems¡ªlike most poems of any kind¡ªare usually those in which the author discovers what he or she needs to say during the act of writing, not those that contain a rigidly pre-determined message.
| Mississippi Confessional |
T.R. Hummer |
| The Lynching |
Thylias Moss |
| The Colonel |
Carolyn Forche |
| On the Lawn at the Villa |
Lewis Simpson |
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SURREAL POEMS
Surreal poems typically render a dream-like state of mind. A surreal image is often powerful because it upsets the objects of the world in a way which we understand to be impossible. Surreal poems often impress by virtue of surprise. Robert Bly has told us that some surreal poems¡ªoften called ¡°deep image poems¡±¡ªmay ¡°connect¡± with the reader's unconscious mind. No matter what type of surreal poem you are writing, the rules of "objective reality" do not adhere. There is, nonetheless, one poetic rule which students would do well to remember. A surreal poem should have a clear connection to the real world. A surreal poem which is nothing but surreal may seem irrelevant to all but the writer.
| A Hollow Tree |
Robert Bly |
| Deer Dancer |
Joy Harjo |
| The Boy of Seventeen |
Juan Felipe Herrera |
| Summer Doorway |
W.S. Merwin |
| Iris |
David St. John |
LOVE POEMS
Everybody knows that a love poem usually pays romantic homage to a lover. Like relative poems and elegies, love poems are vulnerable to excessive sentimentalizing. Students should remember that sentiment is good but sentimentality is not. Keep in mind that the love poem has a public audience; make sure that the poem speaks to readers who don't know anything about the people in the relationship. Avoid cuteness. When writing about sex or desire, avoid the obvious clich¨¦s.
| Twenty-year Marriage |
Ai |
| The Promise |
Toi Derricotte |
| Days of 1981 |
Mark Doty |
| Radio Sky |
Norman Dubie |
| Desire |
Kathy Fagan |
| Incomprehensibly |
Tess Gallagher |
| Before Sex |
Amy Gerstler |
| All the Princes of Heaven |
Patricia Goedicke |
| 1973 |
Jane Hirshfield |
| Adult Joy |
Brenda Hillman |
| Fresh Air |
Kenneth Koch |
| The Lovers |
Dorianne Laux |
| Chivalry |
Carol Muske |
| The Wellspring |
Sharon Olds |
| Lost Innocence of the Potato Givers |
Lucia Perillo |
| The Shore |
David St. John |
| Familiar Story |
Alan Shapiro |
| Aubade |
Karl Shapiro |
| Anniversary |
Hannah Stein |
| The Compliment |
Sue Ellen Thompson |
| For a Thirtieth Anniversary |
David Wagoner |
| Aubade |
Robert Wrigley |
PHILOSOPHICAL POEMS
It's said that poems about politics, philosophy, and religion (and sometimes sexual love) are the most difficult to write. On one hand, most writers are opinionated and the poem can become a soap-box lecture. On the other hand, the language we associate with these topics is already loaded with clich¨¦. Philosophical and religious (or spiritual) poems usually attempt to consider big questions, often having to do with locating meaning, purpose, and identity in a mysterious universe. Philosophical poems can get boring fast. It might be best for students never to start off writing a philosophical poem, because the tendency is to become overly prosaic and sententious¡ªi.e., dull. Still, there are poets who have written very fine poems that manage to marshal strong imagery and fresh language in the service of metaphysical inquiry.
| Self-Portrait in a Convex Mirror |
John Ashbery |
| Coming Through December |
Wendy Barker |
| This Life |
CG Hanzlicek |
| Meridian Plinth |
Brenda Hillman |
| At The End Of The Day I Listen to Bach |
Jacqueline Marcus |
| Berryman |
W.S. Merwin |
| What We Don't Know About Each Other |
Lawrence Raab |
| Searching for the Ox |
Louis Simpson |
| The Distance to the Ocean |
Hannah Stein |
ENIGMA POEMS
I borrow the term ¡°enigma poem¡± from critic Roger Cardinal. With their roots in the work of Gertrude Stein, enigma poems consistently upset conventional referentiality. Grammar sabotages itself. First you understand what's being said, and then you don't. But the enigmatic passage usually sounds like it ought to mean something. Just shy of a type of verse called LANGUAGE poetry, enigma poetry helps to suggest the metaphysical uncertainties of contemporary life. While it can be intriguing, I suggest beginning students forego this kind of poetry until they are well-practiced in conventional, referential (or ¡°symbolic¡±) writing.
| Houseboat Days |
John Ashbery |
| Autumn Leaves |
Jimm Cushing |
| First Figure |
Michael Palmer |
| St. Lucie's Day |
Donald Revell |
COMIC POEMS
The good humorous poem is never merely humorous; the comic component always underscores the poem's serious intent. Because the poem can rely too much on a punch line or because it spends too much energy on puns, it's not easy to write good comic poetry. There are, however, many fine examples of funny contemporary poems.
| The Automobile |
Russell Edson |
| Getting Fired, or ¡°Not Being Retained¡± |
Sandra Gilbert |
| The Stevenson Poster |
Lewis Simpson |
| Bazooks |
Ruth Stone |
LETTER POEMS
I think it was Robert Pinsky who said we tend to express ourselves more intimately in a letter than we do face-to-face. Students writing letter poems should make sure that the poem is accessible in its details to the general reader. Avoid prosaic verse. Tell a good story. Whether it's true or not, mean it.
| A Grandfather's Last Letter |
Norman Dubie |
| Not Going to New York: A Letter |
Robert Hass |
| Letter to Mantsch from Havre |
Richard Hugo |
| Thanksgiving |
Jacqueline Marcus |
| Discoveries, Mid-Letter |
Sandra McPherson |
| Paula Becker to Clara Westhoff |
Adrienne Rich |
BASEBALL POEMS
Baseball is a passion of mine. Here are a few baseball poems for fans of the game. Of course very few good baseball poems are ultimately about the game itself.
| How I Learned English |
Gregory Djanikian |
| A Personal History of the Curveball |
Jonathan Holden |
| Letter to Mantsch from Havre |
Richard Hugo |
| Adam's Dad Teaches the Kids to Play Ball |
Dorianne Laux |
| Season Wish |
Linda Mizejewski |
| The Roundhouse Voices |
Dave Smith |